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For extra English help, visit my website: honeyourenglishcom Comment from : @engvidBenjamin

Edgar wright if he became a writer and not a filmmaker Comment from : @TheRealEasyEverything

they should make the first part ''boring'' a meme Comment from : @itsmeleen

❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Comment from : @raisa_heaven

Show, Don't Tell" is basically the "Tell me X, without telling me X" meme format applied to writing Comment from : @QuirkyMango-c7j

How to actually write a paragraph without repeating the same word like I don't know its synonyms 😭😭 Comment from : @tasnimafauzia1795

thank you for this! Comment from : @jule3175

Thank you for this video Is teach me a lesson ❤❤ Comment from : @TarusilaBaharo-y8g

Now this is teaching!!!💗 Comment from : @awhbqxyzoe4391

I never really understood why writing was important from my elementary to college years In addition, I get that the sentence would be boring but when you add a compound sentence with a description of adjectives fluffy words starts to form and Ive learned that a variety of pple do not like fluffy sheldon words so idk Comment from : @SMD24

you look like Victor Frankenstein from Penny Dreadful Comment from : @Stella29Art

Bro seems as he would be a quantum physics student 😂 Comment from : @Docsplays01

Amazing ❤ Comment from : @abirasultana2758

Don't you laugh? Comment from : @RuhulAmin-hu3ns

1:05brStress doesn't mean doing those thingsbrWhat if he is stressed but was sitting silently Comment from : @Mynotificationsareoff

A story well told is better than a story full of cliche-filled, show-us constructions gleaned from workshop mentality pontificators posing as literary gurus; when in fact, if they really knew what they were talking about, would have a current bestseller instead of hustling on internet street corners Comment from : @WillyBluefield

Thank you very much for this explanation Great content Comment from : @Somaake5

Before watching it, I had trouble impressing the teacher with what I wrote but now as I have applied your ad voice, even my fellows are amazed😍 Comment from : @batmanhuh

The most fruitful video ever Thank you ben Comment from : @bemuasis

I am going to practice just writing the images I can see in my head, instead of stating exactly what the scene is I think it will be fun Comment from : @stephanietherese

You're a great teacher Thank you explaining this so clearly Cheers Comment from : @jamesduff6937

Keep up with the great content and keep pushing through the grind Comment from : @Lswat717Ent

Thanks for sharing your story 👍 br 3/12/ 2024 Comment from : @mowliidaden5259

Show us basically : HOW something looks or is Comment from : @titanblade3706

Many thanks for the video and the numerous tips The videos on YouTube are really very helpful I took a course at novum publishing to improve my writing style, which was also very instructive Practising with an experienced author also helps a lot After that, I also watched a lot of videos and read various books But reading was the least useful thing for me Comment from : @CCCharlson

Thank you, this is going to improve my writing Comment from : @Mikkirose1

Love this video Comment from : @UkaegbuPeaceChiamaka

Every other writer explains this in like 20 minutes or so, and 6 is what is actually needed Thank you Comment from : @Mabrosk1

wow finnaly an example i understand :DDD thank you so much Comment from : @hi3721

incredibly helpful, i at first thought my writing was bad because i didn't know how to properly explain things and stuff, but now i see that its not my writing at all; its the mere fact i never knew how to give the readers a proper description of what was happening, such as the environment, with the characters, even fights in my current series im working on but now i actually have a proper grasp of what i SHOULD have been doing all alongbrbrill gladly try what i saw in this video for my series since i really wanna take a big step forward, thanks lol Comment from : @orchidexehasstoppedworking

This lessons is made me understand about writing structure 😊 Comment from : @YudhaNurachman

Thankss for your test and teaching, it’s so great 🩷😍 Comment from : @RenoSandro

very interesting Comment from : @28respiri

i gota 100 in da guiz Comment from : @sanaarshad4028

You’re a superb teacher Comment from : @shefboyarde

This is helping me because now my mom won’t KEEP YAPPING ME TO WORK SND BE BETTER Comment from : @epicslang

MRBENJAMIN GOOD ENGLISH LESSON ON HOW PEOPLE SHOULD WRITE ENGLISH STATEMENT AND MAKE THEM INTERESTING AND NOT BORING BE CONCISE in detail Comment from : @ShemmarMarriot

Thanks! Even if I am too late, I can still learn😊 Comment from : @The_Real_GableVery

Can we put both? The general and the details Comment from : @macrogoodfood

Great video! Thanks for the information I have my English exams after 30 minutes I hope it goes well Comment from : @Chamlingrai15

Thank you Benjamin! For a long time, phrasing (diction) has been a problem of mine Teachers and editors have advised me to “show don’t tell” but surprisingly did not offer many examples as illustrative as this Currently, I’m writing a personal statement for an application Putting these skills to use actually looks fun now! Comment from : @richf9211

x-) <3 Comment from : @PeterMacansky

Excellent and very useful video, thank you very much!! Comment from : @snltotalrelaxation

I recently got into writing and I intend to turn it into a skillset and I can already see how much I'm going to struggle with it Thank you for showing examples on better writing Comment from : @TheTektronik

So, show no tell is using verb instead of adjective? Am i wrong? Comment from : @Lady_Yhen

Do you favor strong opinions or strong facts? Comment from : @ailinxu

Thank you for your video, sir I'm from India and work in occupational health and safety I want to simplify complex concepts for better understanding Can you help me?" Comment from : @rizwanhaikh4766

Thanks❤️ Comment from : @SamaneAslani-dj9mt

What if he wasn't biting his nails Comment from : @TaxingIsThieving

Thank you for sharing thisThank you also for the way you taught this You are engaging and interesting to listen to Comment from : @patrickjohnson8516

The sweater is ugly ——> The woman in the cafe vomited her coffee at the sight of the man’s attire, causing a small child to weep in the arms of a disgruntled nanny from Romania who cursed him in a language he did not know (Just kidding) Comment from : @Here4theComments9

"The sound from the crowd was deafening," is a good sentence because deafening is emphasized by being the last word in the sentence The greatest emphasis on a word in a sentence is reached by putting it last Deafening also has three syllables, that follows six words with only on syllable each 1 1 1 1 1 1 3 That also has an effect, the rhythm of syllables Comment from : @Youcancallmeal4

Thank you Use a picture made of results Comment from : @mahmoudmousavi5710

Im watching this right before i go to a campus journalism screening test Comment from : @Stardussywashere

Tysm bro it helped my alot i got a 185 on my test :) Comment from : @realbablox

Thanks teacher My english goes very well Comment from : @fakhrizaiman2027

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You need to have a good vocabulary to write well Comment from : @LoveLife-gv8jg

Explain the situation?brbrAnswer: Idk 😅 Comment from : @shan1shorts

Thank you so much! I learned something Valuable all thanks to you 😊🎉✨ Comment from : @MLAKOFFICIAL

Thank for the tips i learned a lot Comment from : @WillaRose-h8i

I never had any lesson on writing before (so this is my first) and that was absolutely revealing!! thank you!! Comment from : @PabloskyS84

Best class ever!!! Comment from : @mppprogramadores

I think this would work the best when writing stories which is helpful! Comment from : @CarolAmante-f6l

When Benjamintalk's my brain creates pictures regarding to his words Comment from : @JamshedAhmed-lg4dg

This was very bright and insightful Thank you!! Comment from : @morethanill

U look like the it clown 😂 Comment from : @OmerysousAdeeb

I just started watching and I love it Comment from : @Xeno3sama

That is a nice way to replace simple words to more better sentence with context, thanks for the bit of elaboration and examples, great lesson Comment from : @LimAnShengAnsonSpringfields

The book "Elements of Style " is a writer's Bible Comment from : @AbbyNormal777

The room was ''Messi'' Comment from : @ZaiodX5

Ty I understand now! 😊😊 Comment from : @CalebZhang-h1v

my brain: the boy was careful with itbrvideo: show don’t tell the boy placed it…?brmy brain: the boy placed it… carefully…brbrall jokes aside, this is very good advice for writers Comment from : @thefakebluejay5394

You help me with one of my Data Project for my Online Job Comment from : @willforeverpubg4235

The video was adjectiv-ilicious Comment from : @Joshuazx

Me to my girlfriend brI love you ❌ brWhen she smiles, whole Antartica melts ✔️ Comment from : @sagarjaideepdeshmukh

Great video, amazing examples Comment from : @emilianoolvera1992

I took the quiz and got 10/10 on it Comment from : @berengerdietiker22

that was really helpful thank you❤ Comment from : @shoyou-v8p

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I feel like in certain points of what you're writing, combining showing and telling can be more influential on your reader Comment from : @gordian190spiral3

Hey, Benjamin, is it valid even when we are writing essays? Or is it just for when we are telling stories or talking to someone, for example? Because, based on my experience, whenever I was requested to write an essay, they always recommended to be concise and more specific I'm not sure if I'm being clear enough, but that's my best Comment from : @tiagoinenglish

Simple minds need simple meanings Not all who read can draw the same conclusion not stated, but infered Difficult when learning a new language You get my point Comment from : @herculespayton2460

That's a great explanation and showing the diffrences made the video way more better❤ Comment from : @kawtharadnan3012

Quick, yet excellent writing tips that can be applied to a variety of contexts Thank you Benjamin Comment from : @Ranjanwatson

Omg, this is the first time someone explained this in a way I understand Comment from : @7th_CAV_Trooper

after watching that video his eyes shrunk in happiness , he stood up looked into mirror and watched himself smile, he was cheered after long time Comment from : @Kishan_Narrator

It won't matter how good your writing is if nobody important will read it This is why this guy is doing videos instead of writing a screenplay right now Comment from : @gianthills

Dude, you sound like David Mitchell! Chance would be a fine thing Comment from : @sudarshankar9094

Okg you’re a legend thx tomorrow I’m having an assessment and this video helped me ❤❤❤ Comment from : @Futurebusinesshehe

I can't control my finger subscribing to your channel Thanks a lot MrBenjamin new subscriber has appeared <3 Comment from : @بسام502بسام

How can i find more video's like thisI want some more Comment from : @Acesthetiqs

I watched this video in 2x speed and I became a better writer in 3 mins Comment from : @SaiDinesh752

Thank you very much Teacher Student from Sydney, Australia Comment from : @HoangTruong-ij4sm

Simple, but 10/10 As a beginner this really was a reality check for me Comment from : @ryushogun9890

I am pleased with myself for having scored an 80 on the quiz Comment from : @ZephyrBW

Painting details add more than simple sentence structure? Comment from : @ZephyrBW

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